Last night's feedback

At the feedback seesion the idea about cartoons was well received, and there was teh suggestion of including more cartoon strips throughout the video.
The issue about us targeting a predominantly white audience yet having an entirely black cast was also raised, as well as the idea about having a very confident actress playing a shy part, which wouldn't work
Questioons ove rthe style of our video were raised as we have not yet made this clear

These three points will have to be discussed at our next meeting

Emma